The focus of criticism was the final scene - the break up scene. Our peers picked up on how the balance of narrative and performance footage was leaning far too heavily on the narrative side. Moreover, the selection of shots could have been better for this scene. In response to this, we trimmed some narrative shots and increased the screen time of performance footage. Plus, we re-selected some shots which displayed some better acting from Louis.
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Sunday, 21 December 2014
Audience Feedback
Alongside teacher feedback, we got peers from within our year who best resembled our target audience, to provide us with feedback. Below is a summary of the feedback we received:
The focus of criticism was the final scene - the break up scene. Our peers picked up on how the balance of narrative and performance footage was leaning far too heavily on the narrative side. Moreover, the selection of shots could have been better for this scene. In response to this, we trimmed some narrative shots and increased the screen time of performance footage. Plus, we re-selected some shots which displayed some better acting from Louis.
The focus of criticism was the final scene - the break up scene. Our peers picked up on how the balance of narrative and performance footage was leaning far too heavily on the narrative side. Moreover, the selection of shots could have been better for this scene. In response to this, we trimmed some narrative shots and increased the screen time of performance footage. Plus, we re-selected some shots which displayed some better acting from Louis.
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